The B<dump> function prints the contents of an B<RRD> in human
readable (?) XML format. This format can be read by rrdrestore.
-Together they allow you to transfer your files from one architecture
-to another as well as manipulating the contents of an B<RRD> file in a
+Together they allow you to transfer your files from one computer architecture
+to another as well to manipulate the contents of an B<RRD> file in a
somewhat more convenient manner.
=item 2.
-Transfer the XML dump to the target system
+Transfer the XML dump to the target system.
=item 3.
-Run B<rrdtool> B<restore> to create a new RRD from the XML dump. See
+Run B<rrdtool> B<restore> to create a new RRD from the XML dump. See
B<rrdrestore> for details.
=back