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+++ b/doc/rrdgraph_graph.pod
@@ -1,3 +1,5 @@
+=pod 
+
 =head1 NAME  
 
 rrdgraph_graph - rrdtool graph command reference
@@ -38,7 +40,7 @@ B<STACK>B<:>I<vname>B<#>I<color>[B<:>I<legend>] (deprecated)
 
 These instructions allow you to generate your image or report.
 If you don't use any graph elements, no graph is generated.
-Similarly no report is generated if you don't use print options.
+Similarly, no report is generated if you don't use print options.
 
 =head1 PRINT
 
@@ -69,24 +71,25 @@ B<%%> just prints a literal '%' character
 
 =item *
 
-B<%#.#le> prints like 1.2346e+04. Optional numbers # are field width and
-decimal precision
+B<%#.#le> prints numbers like 1.2346e+04. The optional integers # denote field
+width and decimal precision.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%#.#lf> prints like 12345.6789, with optional field width and precision
+B<%#.#lf> prints numbers like 12345.6789, with optional field width
+and precision.
 
 =item *
 
 B<%s> place this after B<%le>, B<%lf> or B<%lg>. This will be replaced by the
 appropriate SI magnitude unit and the value will be scaled
-accordingly (123456 -> 123.456 k)
+accordingly (123456 -> 123.456 k).
 
 =item *
 
-B<%S> is similar to B<%s>. It does however use a previously defined
+B<%S> is similar to B<%s>. It does, however, use a previously defined
 magnitude unit. If there is no such unit yet, it tries to define
-one (just like B<%s>). However, if the value is zero, the magnitude
+one (just like B<%s>) unless the value is zero, in which case the magnitude
 unit stays undefined. Thus, formatter strings using B<%S> and no B<%s>
 will all use the same magnitude unit except for zero values.
 
@@ -102,40 +105,41 @@ B<%%> just prints a literal '%' character
 
 =item *
 
-B<%a, %A> prints abbreviated, full weekday name
+B<%a, %A> print the abbreviated or full name of the day of the week.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%b, %B> prints abbreviated, full month name
+B<%b, %B> print the abbreviated or full name of the month.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%d, %m, %y, %H, %M, %S> day,month,year,hour,minute,second all in two-digit format
+B<%d, %m, %y, %H, %M, %S> print day, month, year, hour, minute, and
+second in two-digit format.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%Y> year in 4-digit format
+B<%Y> prints the year in 4-digit format.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%I, %p>  hour (01..12), 'am' or 'pm'
+B<%I, %p> print the hour (01..12), 'am' or 'pm'.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%j, %w> day of the week (0..6), day of the year (1..366)
+B<%j, %w> print day of the week (0..6), day of the year (1..366)
 
 =item *
 
-B<%c, %x, %X> date+time, date, time
+B<%c, %x, %X> print date+time, date only, time only.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%U, %W> week number of the current year with either the first Sunday or
-the first Monday determining the first week
+B<%U, %W> number of the week of the current year, with either the
+first Sunday (%U) or the first Monday (%W) determining the first week.
 
 =item *
 
-B<%Z> time zone
+B<%Z> prints the time zone.
 
 =back
 
@@ -148,15 +152,15 @@ B<%Z> time zone
 =item B<GPRINT>B<:>I<vname>B<:>I<CF>B<:>I<format>
 
 I<Deprecated. Use the new form of this command in new scripts.>
-This is the same as C<PRINT> but now it is printed inside the graph.
+This is the same as C<PRINT>, but printed inside the graph.
 
 =item B<GPRINT>B<:>I<vname>B<:>I<format>
 
-This is the same as C<PRINT> but now it is printed inside the graph.
+This is the same as C<PRINT>, but printed inside the graph.
 
 =item B<COMMENT>B<:>I<text>
 
-Text is printed literally in the legend section of the graph
+Text is printed literally in the legend section of the graph.
 
 =item B<HRULE>B<:>I<value>B<#>I<color> [ :I<legend> ]
 
@@ -165,19 +169,19 @@ I<Deprecated. Use B<LINEx> in new scripts.>
 =item B<VRULE>B<:>I<vname>B<#>I<color> [B<:>I<legend> ]
 
 Draw a vertical line at I<time>.  Its color is composed from three
-hexadecimal numbers specifying the color components (00 is off, FF is
-maximum) red, green and blue.  Optionally a legend box and string is
+hexadecimal numbers specifying the rgb color components (00 is off, FF is
+maximum) red, green and blue. Optionally, a legend box and string is
 printed in the legend section. I<time> may be a number or a variable
 from a B<VDEF>. It is an error to use I<vname>s from B<DEF> or B<CDEF> here.
 
 =item B<LINE>I<width>B<:>I<{vname or number}>B<#>I<color>[B<:>I<legend>]
 [ C<:STACK> ]
 
-Draw a line of the specified width into the graph. If the color
-is not specified, the drawing is done 'blind'.  This is useful when
+Draw a line of the specified width onto the graph. If the color
+is not specified, the drawing is done 'invisibly'. This is useful when
 stacking something else on top of this line. Also optional is the
 legend box and string which will be printed in the legend section
-if specified. The B<vname> can be generated by B<DEF>, B<VDEF> and
+if specified. The B<vname> can be generated by B<DEF>, B<VDEF>, and
 B<CDEF>.  If the optional B<STACK> modifier is used, this line is
 stacked on top of the previous element which can be a B<LINEx> or
 an B<AREA>
@@ -185,7 +189,7 @@ an B<AREA>
 =item B<AREA>B<:>I<vname>B<#>I<rrggbb>[I<aa>][B<:>I<legend>][B<:STACK>]
 
 See B<LINE>, however the area between the x-axis and the line will
-also be filled.
+be filled.
 
 =item B<TICK>B<:>I<vname>B<#>I<rrggbb>[I<aa>][B<:>I<fraction>[B<:>I<legend>]]
 
@@ -199,25 +203,30 @@ optional.
 
 Using this command B<RRDtool> will graph the following elements
 with the specified offset.  For instance, you can specify an
-offset of S<( 7*24*60*60 = ) 604800 seconds> to "look back" one
-week. Make sure to notify the viewer you did so...
+offset of S<( 7*24*60*60 = ) 604'800 seconds> to "look back" one
+week. Make sure to tell the viewer of your graph you did this ...
 As with the other graphing elements, you can specify a number or
 a variable here.
 
 =cut
 
-=item B<PART>B<:>I<vname>B<#>I<rrggbb>[I<aa>][B<:>I<legend>]
-
-B<RRDtool> has now support for B<pie charts>. If you include the
-B<PART> command, the canvas is extended to make room for a chart
-The size of the canvas is determined by the lesser of
-L<width and height|rrdgraph/item_Size>.
-
-Pie parts will be concatenated, the first one will start at the
-top and parts will be created clockwise.  The size of the part
-is defined by the value part of the L<VDEF|rrdgraph_data/VDEF>
-function.  It should return a number between 0 and 100, being a
-percentage.  Providing wrong input will produce undefined results.
+# This section describes the curruently defunct
+# PieChart code.
+#
+# =item B<PART>B<:>I<vname>B<#>I<rrggbb>[I<aa>][B<:>I<legend>]
+#
+# B<RRDtool> has now support for B<pie charts>. If you include the
+# B<PART> command, the canvas is extended to make room for a chart.
+# The size of the canvas is determined by the lesser of
+# L<width and height|rrdgraph/item_Size>.
+#
+# Pie parts will be concatenated, the first one will start at the
+# top and parts will be created clockwise.  The size of the part
+# is defined by the value part of the L<VDEF|rrdgraph_data/VDEF>
+# function.  It should return a number between 0 and 100, being a
+# percentage.  Providing wrong input will produce undefined results.
+#
+#
 
 =pod
 
@@ -233,7 +242,7 @@ When stacking, an element is not placed above the X-axis but rather
 on top of the previous element.  There must be something to stack
 upon.
 
-An B<invisible> LINEx or AREA B<is> present and can be stacked upon.  
+You can use an B<invisible> LINEx or AREA to stacked upon.  
 
 An B<unknown> value makes the entire stack unknown from that moment on.
 You don't know where to begin (the unknown value) and therefore do
@@ -247,21 +256,22 @@ with B<IF> and B<UN> to do so.
 
 =head2 Escaping the colon
 
-In a ':' in a I<legend> argument will mark the end of the legend. To
-enter a ':' into a legend, the colon must be escaped with a backslash '\:'.
-Beware, that many environments look for backslashes themselves, so it may
-be necessary to write two backslashes so that one is passed onto rrd_graph.
+A colon ':' in a I<legend> argument will mark the end of the
+legend. To enter a ':' as part of a legend, the colon must be escaped
+with a backslash '\:'.  Beware that many environments process
+backslashes themselves, so it may be necessary to write two
+backslashes in order to one being passed onto rrd_graph.
 
 =head2 String Formatting
 
-The text printed below the actual graph can be formated by appending special
-escaped characters at the end of a text. When ever such a character occurs,
+The text printed below the actual graph can be formatted by appending special
+escape characters at the end of a text. When ever such a character occurs,
 all pending text is pushed onto the graph according to the character
 specified.
 
 Valid markers are: B<\j> for justified, B<\l> for left aligned, B<\r> for
-right aligned and B<\c> for centered. In the next section there is an
-example showing how to use centered formating.
+right aligned, and B<\c> for centered. In the next section there is an
+example showing how to use centered formatting.
 
 Normally there are two space characters inserted between every two items
 printed into the graph. The space following a string can be suppressed by
@@ -271,18 +281,19 @@ in connection with B<%s> to suppress empty unit strings.
 
  GPRINT:a:MAX:%lf%s\g
 
-A special case is COMMENT:B<\s> this inserts some additional vertical space
+A special case is COMMENT:B<\s> which inserts some additional vertical space
 before placing the next row of legends.
 
-If you are using the proportional font in your graph, you can use tab characters
-or the sequence B<\t> to lin-up legend elements. Note that the tabs inserted are
-relative to the start of the current legend element!
+If you are using the proportional font in your graph, you can use tab
+characters or the sequence B<\t> to line-up legend elements. Note that
+the tabs inserted are relative to the start of the current legend
+element!
 
 =head1 SEE ALSO
 
 L<rrdgraph> gives an overview of how B<rrdtool graph> works.
-L<rrdgraph_data> describes B<DEF>,B<CDEF> and B<VDEF> in detail,
-L<rrdgraph_rpn> describes the B<RPN> language used in the B<?DEF> statements,
+L<rrdgraph_data> describes B<DEF>,B<CDEF> and B<VDEF> in detail.
+L<rrdgraph_rpn> describes the B<RPN> language used in the B<?DEF> statements.
 L<rrdgraph_graph> page describes all of the graph and print functions.
 
 Make sure to read L<rrdgraph_examples> for tipsE<amp>tricks.